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Softly whispered words are breathed across my frozen cheek, bouncing meaningless upon deaf ears. He smiles. This smile is misplaced. It doesn’t belong in this horrible scene. His smile is warm, kind, caressing. As he gently holds my blood stained face. With long pale pianist fingers her draws a heart on the opposite cheek. Smiling wider still as the blood stains. How can this be? He set the scene so perfectly. How could I have guessed? The tall princely aristocrat with angel blond hair in charmingly tousled curls and mesmerizing sapphire eyes. He who said he loved me…was my murderer. See the irresistible bait, the private room hidden deep within the mansion, furnished with luxury. Such wealth, revered even among the elite the beautiful mahogany fireplace casting the golden glow over the room, and illuminating the plush couch where he sat. The light danced across the chandeliers’ crystal tear drops as the candles burned, content. Dancing and laughing even as he takes the silver knife and slits my throat. It’s too bad really; I had such potential, such a future. My mother’s plan for me really wasn’t so bad…The last words I hear are from him, the prince who was really never the same since she left. With her sudden death the club closed, the hosts had faded into shells of their former selves, but non-so-much as him: The king, Tamaki Souo. His voice echoes in my ears as sound and light fade from me. “I love you…Haruhi…”
- by Adorable_Hunny_Luv |
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- | Submitted on 03/23/2010 |
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- Title: Souo’s Murdered ________
- Artist: Adorable_Hunny_Luv
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Description:
A short story of life after Haruhi’s Murder.
total fanfiction haruhi doesnt get murdered and tam-chan doesnt go phsycopathic from depression and denial...
by the way the narrator is not haruhi, and tamaki did not kill her. :) - Date: 03/23/2010
- Tags: suohs murdered ouranhighschoolhostclub fanfiction
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Comments (5 Comments)
- um jello - 09/15/2014
- So you make is seem like Tamaki killed her, then it seems like he didn't kill her. I think its because the girl he killed seems like Haruhi, so that should be fixed. I got your explanation for Holly, but... you need to make it understandable for everyone in your writing. I've been reading and writing for a long time and when people get confused its not a good thing. You should make it clearer, but when you fix it, if you fix it... I'm sure it will be great. smile keep on writing
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- GothicAngel10121 - 05/20/2010
- Interesting! Great job. : D
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- Adorable_Hunny_Luv - 05/10/2010
- holly, someone killed haruhi and it pretty much drove tamaki to become a murderer and this story is from one of the girls point of view that he killed.
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- overkill preamble - 05/08/2010
- I DONT GET IT! who killed who?! STOP CONFUSIN ME!!!!!!
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- Adorable_Hunny_Luv - 03/23/2010
- yes there are a few (cough) grammar mistakes and there is a line in there that says her instead of he.
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