-
Today was just another horrible day,
I’ve been crying,
I’m still crying,
It hurts so much.
All the emotions are welling up,
I rummage through my things,
The shiny silver blade glistens in the light,
As I sink in the sharp blade,
Blood seeps through,
It stings,
It hurts,
But I’d rather this pain than the pain I go through every day.
Tears slip from my cheeks,
I let the blood drip down my arm,
How did I become like this ?
- by AlmostAshleigh |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 04/13/2010 |
- Skip
- Title: The Art Of The Razor
- Artist: AlmostAshleigh
- Description: maybe someone who self-harms themselves thinks like this ?
- Date: 04/13/2010
- Tags: razorblade
- Report Post
Comments (5 Comments)
- Shibu Mizaku - 02/14/2011
- Ugh.... you got a trashcan I can puke in? Look, it's a great idea to write about some things you have little clue about, but this is honestly horrible. I really doubt any cutter stares at the blade and thinks 'hey. it's silver and shiny.' No, they want to feel pain, not admire the blade. Try something else. Please.
- Report As Spam
- out of controll - 02/14/2011
- sorry but stick to what you know and stop trying to guess at how people feel in situations you probably never have been in. also...this shames me to say, but this isn't art, it is a big chunk of fail.
- Report As Spam
- Fruitcake Sunbae - 06/19/2010
-
PFFFFFT.
No...just, no. - Report As Spam
- Miss Ribbon - 04/26/2010
- great job. I like it.
- Report As Spam
- Zinxjinx - 04/13/2010
- You should prob do some more research on cutters. I think they go for the pain in order to stop feeling numb and in some strange way, have control over the pain that they feel. Also, there's a sort of crying for help in cutting too coz it leaves noticeable marks...
- Report As Spam