- john woke up with a start and looked around . "were am i?" he asked him self then he remmmebered the insain ayslum of san aintoin texas. john sighed he had let his whole team die to save him self. treson. a death penalty exspecilly in texa... there was a ear pericing scream at the door and even louder bang left a human sized dent in the door . he walk up to the door as it fell off its hinges and clatterd to the floor.he did not look at the body but the crazed eyed man looking at him like he was food".who the...wat the...."john yeld at the man. the man lunged at john and john jumped back but the man bit into his arm and pain shot through his body. john punched the guy in the face and pushed him off. "wat the hell"john yeld as his arm turned black he felt new strenght and when the man lunged again john was so qick thaat he grabed the man by the throaght and was choking him before even he relized it. the man strugles were futile and were gettting weaker john was surprised even him self .he sqeezed harder and broke his neck but the man said this before he died."welcom to hell and my world hahahahahaaahahhahahahahaahhaaaaaa.
- by darkfire the incubus |
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- | Submitted on 06/08/2010 |
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- Title: the aysulum
- Artist: darkfire the incubus
- Description: it is a stoy about a retired soilder who was charged with treson for letting his whole team die . after that he was senctencesed to death.but right after the trial he went crazy... this is were the fun begains
- Date: 06/08/2010
- Tags: aysulum
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Comments (2 Comments)
- StrikeFreedomX10 - 07/08/2010
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awesome start
but maybe you should include WHAT happened to his team
its small things like that, that keep me intrested - Report As Spam
- darkfire the incubus - 06/08/2010
- if u would chapter2 plz pm me
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