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There I was, all alone in the darkness, no Luna, just rock. I had never been alone in complete darkness before, with no Luna light from the trees. I quickly learned that me in a dark cave, in the Trenchies, with no energy was not a good mix. Edor was never left without a light on, but that was quickly changing. More Powers were dying, more Cunas were concoring, my best friends had disapeared, and I would soon join them. I tried to turn on my own Luna, but I was so weak that my bright blue eyes flickered out. I was cold, and covered in more blood then I ever had before. It was silent...until a small but warm and familiar whisper, flowed through my ears.
"Kit..." he whispered calmly,"...don't be afraid, I'm here." The warmth from his breath sent chills running down my spine. Two arms pulled me into a close hug, one arm around my waist, and the other around my shoulders. The way he would do it from behind, just to tell me that it would be alright. He kissed me on my cheek, and I could feel his energy with my own. It could be, but it was.
As the warm tears rolled down my face, I softly cried,"Max? Is it you?" In responses, he whispered a small yes. He was very weak. I could tell because I could feel that his energy was very low. "But...but how are you alive?"
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- Title: Crystals: Preveiw
- Artist: EtherealGirl
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Yeah A little bit from a story (a very long story too be exact) That I'm having trouble putting on paper...But now I'm going to try. Hopes you like!
ps...This has been my little secret since forever and now it's coming out so plz give some feedback! - Date: 06/20/2010
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Comments (7 Comments)
- EtherealGirl - 07/22/2010
- oops It was supossed to be "It couldn't be, but it was."
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- Seador - 07/21/2010
- Very good! I like your writing style. I really can't find anything wrong with it except the sentence "It could be, but it was" confuses me a bit haha. From this preview I can tell this is very a very original and unique story (or at least I've never read anything like this). Can't wait to read more!
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- EtherealGirl - 07/17/2010
- thanks! you will!
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- Aryn Michael Flynn - 07/15/2010
- Wow, this is really great, can't wait to see more? :] 5/5
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- XxxlostmyselfxxX - 07/08/2010
- i think its really cool
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- EtherealGirl - 06/22/2010
- Thank-you so much!
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- JennyLuvsU16 - 06/21/2010
- Love it 5/5
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