-
If I knew you would leave me,
I would not have done it to you,
If I knew you wanted me to go after you,
I would have searched the whole world for you.
Let me rewind time, to that place where we met,
I should have warn you of my tong,
I should have warn you of my way,
But then if I did, you would not have stayed.
If I knew you were fragile,
I would have been gentle,
If I knew you were inexperience,
I would have run beyond the fence!
Let me rewind time, to our very first ever date,
I was a nut, and you thought it was a fake state,
I should have told you that I was for real,
That I, before you was the real deal.
If I have known it would of hurt you,
I would have known what to do,
If I knew that you were serious,
I would not have been furious,
Let me rewind time, so I could avoid hurting you,
I would not have thought of asking you out, and do.
But I learned my lesson, and won’t do wrong no more,
For what else could I do? You left, and went out the door.
I will move on and find another; you would always be my first love,
You will always be different from the rest, my beautiful dove.
- by kuro_yuki_girl |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 03/25/2011 |
- Skip
- Title: Rewind Time
- Artist: kuro_yuki_girl
- Description: I was lazy with this one.
- Date: 03/25/2011
- Tags: rewind time
- Report Post
Comments (4 Comments)
- kuro_yuki_girl - 04/06/2011
- Thanks! Well, its kind of funny, because this is one of the poems i made that i did not really care about. I was like blah, when i wrote it.
- Report As Spam
- Hilda-san - 04/05/2011
- i agree it speaks unlike others that just say it because everyone else does... this one sticks out
- Report As Spam
- kuro_yuki_girl - 03/27/2011
- Thanks. Well i was lazy with this. More then i usually am.
- Report As Spam
- little grrl of doom - 03/27/2011
- it has some rough spots that don't necessarily flow well, but overall this is a good poem
- Report As Spam