Memory is worth a million more

• Artist: Twizted_Trixta
• Description: They say a picture is worth a thousand words.
  But a memory is worth a million more.
• Date: 06/13/2009
• Tags: memory worth million more

They say a picture is worth a thousand words.
But how many for a memory?
A first kiss
A first love
The one you want forever,
in a memory with you together.
In their arms
Safe and calm
Their warm embrace
and gentle hand on your face.
They say a picture is worth a thousand words.
But a memory is worth a million more.

Comments

[oX-silent-rose-Xo]

i agree. i love it. it's so true.

[Twizted_Trixta]

But the first kiss and such is such a better memory and worth so much more.. a last kiss and last hug and such wont work in this becuz the arent worth much unless its the last time you'd see the person, which isnt the case in this poem. those first memories are worth so many more words that will never nor can ever be voiced because they are too emotion filled. seeming generic is fine, but read it a few times before deeming it as such.. try to get it from the writers point instead of the readers.

[Kayla Tango]

beautiful...

[Morica Night]

i like it very pretty

[Twankiie]

It's nice, but it seems a little generic.
I would have liked to see it about the last, rather than the first. The last time you heard their voice, the last time you fought and hugged or embraced.
Of course it would be a bit sadder I guess. XD

[xlelixnessax]

That was beautiful...*tear* I LOVE it..my new favorite...I rate it a 5...astonishing job!