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i walk through the dark mist thinking to myself " where am i? what am i doing here?" i had no idea where i was. i wanted to yell help but i new no one was going to hear me because i ran away from my home and my village. i can't go back, even if i wanted to, no one wants me there anymore. no one cares for me there. i thought if i ran away and found a new village i could start a new beginning for myself but now, im lost, i cant find my way out. i try to find food and shelter but all i can find is the ground and the foggy cold mist. i thought i could've survive by myself and travel alone. i new i had to take someone with me but i didnt listen to myself, i thought wrong.
days pass by and im dying from hunger and lonleyness. i said to myself " i dont wanna die alone.. " i new i was going to die alone in the dark. i new it from the beginning, ever since i was born. when i was born, my mother died and my father was crying. when i got to kindregarden i asked my dad a question " wheres mommY?" he answered "shes up there now watching over us" i ask again " what happened to her" he got angry at me and started to cry like he did when she died. "she died because of you! i hate you! i never wanted you! i hated you ever since you were born and after she died!" he yelled crying at me. i look down at my feet and started to cry too. i ran outside. and thats how i got here. now im alone.
a week passes by and im dead.
someone out hunting found me but he was to late to save me. he buried me. but before that he found a tear sliding down from my cheek. he said "rest in peace!" he buried me.
the tomestone said "little girl died in the forest from hunger and lonleyness."
- by Divine_Blossom |
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- | Submitted on 12/23/2008 |
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- Title: little girl found dead
- Artist: Divine_Blossom
- Description: this girl died of hunger and lonleyness. she was a lonley girl who ran away from her home and her village. she thought she could find another village so she could start a new beginning for herself
- Date: 12/23/2008
- Tags: little girl found dead
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Comments (7 Comments)
- zZMostlySleepyZz - 05/08/2009
- it makes a little sens your a good writer i would definatly read your stories anytime
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- Gerard_Ray_Frank - 04/25/2009
- Ummmm...it kinda sucks. I really don't like it. It keeps going back to different parts. You should just start with what first happened. 1/5 Your grammer and spelling also suck.
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- jbabe369 - 04/22/2009
- its is really good i love it
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- D-Boo37 - 04/11/2009
- i liked it youre good at this dont stop believin!
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- Xx-Color_me_crayon-xX - 03/29/2009
- i would give it a 4.5 if i could cuz a grammar but sides dat its..............wow girl
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- abcdeyui - 03/29/2009
- Uhh, you need to go back to the third grade and learn some grammar skills. The main idea is kinda thrown all over the place. Also, you need to organize it. There is absolutely no organization whatsoever. I cannot stress enough, that organization is key to making a masterpiece.
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- Sparkly Tits - 03/22/2009
- could have some improvement on grammar. still good with the plot and everything. if i can i will rate it a 4/5 but i cant vote due to the fact it reads "This contest is not open for voting" read minds? go over my avi, and you will see "view gallery"
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