The Scar

• Artist: Fake Silence
• Description: This is the first time I ever wrote something this EMO.
  And, i personally think it's quite okay for a first time...
  Tell me what you think of it and, how to improve.
  I know it's short.
• Date: 01/08/2009
• Tags: scar

A broken plate is quite useless.
My broken heart took quite a long time to recover.

And, now,
Even though it's almost healed,
I know it'll forever leave a scar...

A scar,
Just like the one I have on my left wrist,
The one I carved,
The day you walked away.

Comments

[P00R L3N0]

i liked it. I would have liked to see a bit more of it. Maybe instead of just leaving it so bluntly, lets try and hide it so the reader will be like "80 OH MY"
you know? but i did like it

[Rose Blackburn]

I like it. But he's right. blood is sacred but no one will judge you. i'M EMO myself and no one judges me. I love it 5/5

[290DarkStars]

ouch...im sorry that your a cutter... but blood is sacred... remember that.

[Bluecandescent]

wow thats beautiful!! and i agree with My Purple Heart

[xXRawr-GirrXx]

Interesting... Try to put more depth into it though. Make your audience understand what your feeling. But, not by using a ton of words, but by word choice and/or format and maybe even text color. I'm not trying to make it sound all fancy and stuff but just sayin'. It's just an opinion... 4/5

[Gwenetrina]

Very good, very sad, very touching, Keep it up

[tear goddess]

Oh, btw, 4/5