The Shoulder

• Artist: Capitan Tyler O
• Description: My Ex Girlfriends Parents split up last year and she came over to my house and cried all night. I wrote this in memory of her around that time. But it's one of my few short poems
• Date: 07/15/2008
• Tags: poetry sweet simple

[b]The Shoulder

It seemed so fast,

It hurt so much.

When you cried I was

a crutch.

But as time passed,

your heart got colder.

And then you had a breakdown,

and for your tears,

I was a shoulder.



(I made that up in like 5 minz so, bear with me)

By: Tyler Orlando

Comments

[spiritgirl95]

hey person below me! i wrote a poem bout a leaf falling to the ground and as soon as it fell to the ground i was finshed with the poem and it was good!!

[Toastbusters]

Ewww!
Nothing should ever be 'finished' in five minutes, let alone five "minz"; edit and re-edit. This piece is a landfill.