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The little cloud ambles across
the big, wide ocean
growing bigger and getting stronger
as she moves along
but when she reaches the land,
she gets hot and bothered and tired
she doesn’t like the land so
she wimps and sobs and cries
until she becomes smaller and smaller
then walks back to the ocean
maybe she’ll come back next week
or maybe later today.
- by xxblah_girlxx |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/16/2008 |
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- Title: Cloud
- Artist: xxblah_girlxx
- Description: This was a personification poem I wrote a while ago when i was 13. I really like it and so does my english teacher so hopefully you do too! Thanks to all reasonable comments - good and bad.
- Date: 07/16/2008
- Tags: cloud poem personification metaphors easy
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Comments (2 Comments)
- xxblah_girlxx - 07/10/2009
- Yay! <3 thankyou ^u^
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- daisukesgurl - 07/05/2009
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That's nice and very descriptive. biggrin
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