When you leave..

• Artist: Destructive Scene
• Description: I have a friend leaving me soon..
  so i wrote this for him..
  i hope it expresses love and hurt...
  i hope you like it. ^.^
• Date: 07/16/2008
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When you leave me.
Please say goodbye.
If you dont. its okay...
I'll try not to cry.
Because boy, you're my love.
Because Hun, i think your my drug.
The summer without you
is gonna be like having a band without a drummer
its gonna be off beat and a total bummer.
But when you leave me remember one thing..
I love you alot.
You know its true.
Just dont forget me..
Because im stuck to you like glue.

Comments

[rainbow vag sauce]

that what she is saying...its not necessarily a hurting poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
god...read more into it idiot...

[Crystalinemoon]

hmmm. Its good i just didn't get the "hurt" out of it. It sounds like your saying that you'll be ok if he doesn't say goodbye that you'll live.

[rainbow vag sauce]

omg
nalin!
you thought oyur poems werent that good!
but people like them...
haha..
you were wrong..
and i was right
razz

[schrei_rette_mich483]

This is a good poem! like the part about the drummer.

[the cheese to my macaroni]

It's a cute love poem...Will you read my poem too?

[Fire Rock Angel]

ITs good but u shouldnt put the poem in that kind of rythem scheme