- i ask myself, why do i try to be. do i wanna,be myself, or continue, this charade. gotta remember, no one, else is me, no one, can be me, butt me. i love who i love, i hate who i hate, i open up and i, close myself in, gotta tell myself, no one, no one, but me. as simple as shadows on the walls, i cant describe, how i feel now. but im me.
- by Lord Little black_rose |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/20/2008 |
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- Title: im me
- Artist: Lord Little black_rose
- Description: a song saying how most girls feel
- Date: 07/20/2008
- Tags: imme
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Faryata - 09/19/2010
- i like it
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- xXsecret_artistXx - 02/13/2009
- the poem is completely awesome... despite the spelling mistakes. XD
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- rosemidnight17 - 07/20/2008
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its very good only i would put more rhythm into it. all conversations and letters have a rhythm in it somewhere. so spread out your poem in poetry form and it will look more like a poem.
[ps-i love non-rhyming poems!] - Report As Spam
- chris dave - 07/20/2008
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ok but some spelling mistakes lol !!!
p.s. i like stuff thats rhymes - Report As Spam
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