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So beautiful the words of one
One so misunderstood
A beast as seen by all
Features shrouded beneath a hood
Hidden away and all alone
Feeling more pain that anyone should
He stays this way with hope
Hope that just one person would
Would seek him out and see him
See him as only One could
Time passes on unmarked and cruel
Leaving the beast as only a fool
His hopes fading slowly away
As he waits so patiently for the day
The day that One would come and find
Someone without the human pride
The pride that made him fear so much
Fearing most the human touch
The beast is left to be forgotten
As the days pass by and leave him behind
Leave him alone in a death so cold
As cold as the heart that is left to remind
To remind the One if they might come
Of the beast he hoped they would find
The beast he was that longed for just
Just to be found by the One so kind...
The one with the purest of hearts
To which his own could finally bind.
But his fear was his weakness
And through fear the Beast resigned
Only to miss the One great chance
Leaving One angel to wait and find
That her lost lover's heart had left her behind.
- Title: Forgotten
- Artist: Ahneera
- Description: This is a poem that I wrote for a very close friend of mine. It suited her situation and it really touched her. I'm hoping that it does the same for the voters.
- Date: 09/08/2008
- Tags: forgotten angel beast sadness lonlieness
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Comments (5 Comments)
- ii-Blu3 Dayz-ii - 12/21/2008
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this is amazing..hey check out my poem i posted it a few days ago
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- browndj3 - 09/22/2008
- This is really good. Like the others said, it felt like a story, and it could easily be converted into one. Can't wait to read more of your work.
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- the_ashen_child - 09/19/2008
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i liked it!! i want to give him a hug!!! ^^
but i agree with Thy its like reading a story, very good - Report As Spam
- Novel of Nirvana - 09/19/2008
- It felt like I was reading a story. And I could actually imagine the hooded figure..Very good.
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- spikeforever - 09/09/2008
- sorry not dat gud with words when it comes 2 sumthing very gud s i'll leave it 2 fantastic poem n dun give up on ur poetry writing..its really a great poem..hope u win..
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