Darkness..

• Artist: Hypnotic Soul
• Description: This poem is a little bit of an attempt to write a poem that I had got into a poetry contest at school and never got it back yet so once I do I'll put that up. I don't think what I wrote is very good, but I hope yall like it.
• Date: 10/19/2008
• Tags: darkness lamplight past memories

Darkness it surrounds us as we cling to the lamp light of the past
We try to grasp to memories we hold dear
The ones we love, the ones we hate all in the lamp light of the past
We try and try to cling to our little light as the world tells us it was not meant to be
We fight and stand as the light slowly fades
Until...
Everything is gone...
Our light is gone our will is gone
Our memories are gone...
With the lamp light of the past
By: Sean P.

Comments

[Revenging Mistress]

That is pretty awesome. I can't even imagine what the other one is if it's better than this.

[Hypnotic Soul]

Lol thank you >< I wish I had my original, but its some where in old school books -has to find it-

[sezuko]

i really like it its so different and good.