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My heart bleeds for it is in pain
you have put it back right into vain.
i plea for forgivnesss time and time again
this is a battle and i have been slain.
reaching out i wanted your hand
you refuse now i can not stand.
i fall to my knees and oh how it burns
my heart it breaks and now it turns.
stone cold i have become thanks to you
an animal trapped in a hurtful zoo.
i am an creature tamed by your hurtful charm
all you bring is a mean and terrible harm.
you have broken me and turned me to ice
for staying now i shall pay my fair price.
to ask you to return my love
it felt like your fiery shove.
it burns me to stay by your side
ive been pulled away by a powerful tide.
my last parting words i do hope hurt
make you feel like some worthless dirt.
"thou shall not follow my poisoned heart
i hope ye die with my bloody stained dart"....
- Title: Heart Bleeds In Pain
- Artist: Emyy-Skyy
- Description: I was in a poetic mood, so i randomly decided to try putting a poem in here. i write poetry alot for several reasons, and i have quite a few good ones. this is just a thought i needed people's opinions on. if its good, expect more. (yea, often my poerty is about being hurt, but at least it sounds good!)
- Date: 10/29/2008
- Tags: heart bleedsinpain rhyme love
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Comments (4 Comments)
- LaTiNo LoPeZ - 02/04/2009
- WOW!!! Amazing make another!!! smile
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- kate3339 - 10/30/2008
- nice it is really good! 5/5
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- freaky kitty1 - 10/29/2008
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Wow that's really good!! I agree w/ the one person hiwayhotdog1958 !!!
This is amazing! keep it up!! - Report As Spam
- hiwayhotdog1958 - 10/29/2008
- Miss Emyy, You write beautiful poetry keep it up this is a wonderful piece. Try putting it on Poetry.com sometime too! Keep writing.
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