Fluttering heart

• Artist: MadHatHuntress
• Description:
• Date: 11/08/2008
• Tags: fluttering heart

I feel happy yet sad.

Feel like dancing but also want to hurt.

I smile and yet tears come down my face.

This feeling is powerful, what is the word for it?

Oh that's right.

The word for this feeling is love.

Comments

[MadHatHuntress]

Poems don't have to rhyme and also I wrote this on a weird day, so I know it isn't good. But, I thought I might as well put this on, just for fun.

[Miyaka Hana]

Ummm...it was a REALLY short poem, not much a poem to be honest in my opinion. I think you could have made it flow a LOT more, and maybe make it rhyme just a little? Well, keep working. ^_^'

[phoenixdreamlink]

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