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Rain pours from the heavens,
The unforeseen storm shakes the horizon.
The screaming silence precedes the thunder,
This storm will come, more terrible and devastating than the last.
Steady beats on the drum.
Ever closer it draws.
It is upon me now,
I gaze into its depths,
Hoping to see the answer I so desperately search.
As the calm passes over me,
Lightning strikes,
The force of nature coursing through my veins,
Blissful music touches my ear as I fall to darkness.
- Title: Rain
- Artist: Indvick
- Description: not my best, what you guys think?
- Date: 11/09/2008
- Tags: rain
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Comments (3 Comments)
- snowgirl141 - 12/05/2008
- oh i love it is really good!
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- Heirii-Chan - 11/10/2008
- That's really good.
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- SakuraIchigoRyu - 11/09/2008
- Hmmm... the imagery is nice, but you skip around a bit emotionally. Try to stick more with one individual feeling and really lay into that wonderful wording you have going.
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