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Ebony Orbs
Large ebony orbs of quenched molten fire
Flashing within bleeding leaves
The gray spirits above
Raining, raining of blood and light through barren trees
Mangled paws, scorched claws unleashed, last of its pride
Running, running soundlessly within a mossy maze
Antlers flashed within the orbs, within the very edge
Antlers quicker than mangled claws
Antlers, antlers… antlers
The last, the very last, the last flame…
Ancient ancestral remains scattered over twisted ancient roots
The last paw trapped, stumbled,
… died.
The last night, large ebony orbs of death
Within a cage of wooden planks
Tail tucked, belly dragged upon the wood
Whimpering, prodding one wet nose under a muddy boot
And died.
- Title: Ebony Orbs
- Artist: Yuehyin
- Description: Ebony orbs of one of the fiercest animals.
- Date: 11/24/2008
- Tags: poetry yuehyin
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Gylfie531 - 07/20/2009
- it's a bit strange... i believe this is supposed to be something mythical but it just sounds a bit...odd. like something's wrong, out of place. still, 4/5.
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- purplehous - 11/26/2008
- I like it
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- Jacy_Arienh_Sagira - 11/25/2008
- Amazing imagery 5 stars worth!
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