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Mom,
i know you can't speak anymore,
i know you can't see anymore,
i know you can't hear anymore,
i know you can't breathe anymore,
but let me know,
that where ever you are,
you can speak to me in my dreams,
you can see me as i cry,
you can hear me as i laugh,
you can breathe in the scent of my lonelyness.
Mom,
i know i can speak,
i know i can see,
i know i can hear,
i know i can breathe,
but let me know,
that where ever you are,
i can speak to you,
i can see you,
i can hear you,
i can breathe in the scent of your happiness.
Mom,
in your world you and i can do all those things together,
but here,
only i can speak,
see,
hear,
breathe,
but where ever you are,
i hope your happy,
and i'm sorry for being the way i am.
Mom,
i love you.
- by USETHISACCOUNT483 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/28/2008 |
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- Title: Mom
- Artist: USETHISACCOUNT483
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i just wrote this O_O, umm bash me aLL you want, but that just came from my heart within a few minutes, and thats how i feel about my mom who passed away 3 years sgo because of cancer she had for 2 and 1/2 years, ya go ahead make ur stupid comments say 'OH sob stories' and 'cry me a river' and all that s**t!! BECAUSE IDC!!! OK!! if U HAVE TIME TO LEAVE THOSE COMMENTS THEN U HAVE NO LIfE!!,
well i hope you like it, for those who arent jackasses -,..,- - Date: 11/28/2008
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Pinuyu - 02/26/2009
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I want to cry......
may your mother rest in peace smile - Report As Spam
- iCrazii_Angel - 12/18/2008
- aww thats so sad T^T I'm sorry about your mom
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- Mizz Tweety Bird601 - 11/28/2008
- i wanna cry now T^T
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- Joreph - 11/28/2008
- It was very personal and for that I show you a lot of respect but theres no element of surprise just expected lyrics. But baring your soul like that can be difficult.
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- ree-ree_bear - 11/28/2008
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umm im not quite sure bout sob comments or horrible comments. but i like your poem even in a couple minutes when you did it its really powerful to share people a piece of your life and i give you major props.
dont let anyone ever bring you down and im super happy you shared it with everyone.
dont let anyone beat you down dark demon wolf(:
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- skullbleeder - 11/28/2008
- that was really good. im sorry about ur mom.
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