"Nightmare."

• Artist: AccidentlyInLove
• Description: I would like to thank everyone that comments..
  
  thanks.
  
  <3
  
  and any ideas for improving..?
• Date: 12/05/2008
• Tags: nightmare

Slowly tears of blood she starts to weep
and into a troubled dream she begins to seep
Her hair strangling her as she twists and turns
and she starts to cry out "It burns, it burns"
No physical pain, for it is a thing of the mind
The sleep she escapes, leaving the dream behind
Every night, the nightmare comes back
and the burning fire returns to attack
Her eyes swell with tears
as she welcomes her fears
to the dream that never ends

Comments

[Seras_Victoria12485]

Good end rhyme, that's something I can't do. It reminds me of "The Dream" (Intro)-Shinedown. As for improving, nothing.

[Queen Tsundere]

Very well done. sounds like something i would write : ) 5/5

[AccidentlyInLove]

Thanks.. that means a lot to me.. <3 <3

[XxemotessalovesyouxX]

wow thats awsome 5/5 ^^