'Til the day i die

• Artist: xiRiotGirlix
• Description: This is a poem me and my friend put together....
  i think it sux but my friend wants me to put it up...so...
• Date: 12/10/2008
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when i saw u standin there
it was hard not to stare
my heart was racing,
my news were weak,
it was so bad that i
couldn't even speak,

my friends say "hes not worth it"
"why even try" i say "i don't know
but i'm reall into this guy"

I keep thinking of ways i could
tell you,
but you know i'm to shy
so i'll keep it inside forever..
'til the day i die

Comments

[Mr_Impassive]

im going to make my own version

When i see you
All i can do is stare
I see you with him
you're not mines but i dont want to share
They say you're happy with the one you got
And even if she say's hi i will soon be forgot
But maybe i can try
But if i get rejected i may cry
So i'll keep it inside forever
Ti'll the day i die...

[Bioku luna]

it's ok.

[Cottoncandyocbra3]

Your friend was right. Please type out the words, and please stop being so very generic and derived... 1/5.

[HarajukuGirl92]

LOVE IT! smile

[coolven001]

wow its so powerful 5/5 and favorite and this is my life ive been there done that but nayway great job.