My spirit soars

• Artist: iiHappy_Bunny
• Description: This poem was inspired by saddness I have felt in my heart. And I just wanted to share it with Gaia. Tell me what you think, more to be posted l8r.
  
  Peace
• Date: 12/10/2008
• Tags: spirit soars

My spirit soars with angel's wings
so high above the earth, I've seen
the pain and turmoil that's gone on since
it's birth.

My spirit soars with angel's wings
no one can ever see, the hurt and anguish
that kills the love that is inside of me.

My spirit soars with angel's wings
as tears fall down my face, why
does evil ruin the human race

My spirit soars with angel's wings
dear Father up above, please send
down your abundance of love.

Comments

[Black_Rose_Noir]

This poem made me think, It is very visual in the style and format. I will give it a 4/5 as well.

[Mud99]

It is beautiful.... Humans are the source of evil. 4/5

[iiHappy_Bunny]

Thank you, I know that God is there for me, it was a time when I lost my best friend to a drunk driver. So yeah, thank you.

[ThisIsNotMyNameBruh]

thats a beautiful poem,i love how u arranged the parts,and dont worry,there is a God up above and he does care for u,u just need to open ure eyes and see all the beauty in everything that he has done 4 u sad ,he loves u very much and wants u 2 b happy

[Tsuki Kurai]

Edit: that would be, 3 and 4, not 2 and 3. X3

[Tsuki Kurai]

Verse 2: Silly, evil doesn't ruin the human race, humans are just inherently evil. =3
Verse 3: Don't count on it, if there is a god at all, it obviously doesn't care about us insignificant humans.