Unoticed death

• Artist: 19PrinceAngel91
• Description: Random poem came into my head.
• Date: 12/14/2008
• Tags: death words feelings sorrow hate

What do you mean?
I mean nothing to you?
You talk words of venom.
They burn, make my mind hiss
the pain, over whielming it is
Save me from you
Couse I cant take it much longer

Your gone now
But the pain
its never left
Why? Did you do this
This horrible crime

I cant live much longer.
I cant stand this life.
Sorry, Sorry.
I am not strong.
Good Bye, forever more

Dead am I
Three weeks gone
no one has noticed
I lay rotting in my bed.
the sheets stained
with my blood.
the gun lay by my side.

They Find me.
but its too late.
Sorry but I was weak.
I'm laid in the ground.
To rest forever.
Peace finaly absorbs my soul.

Comments

[final scene]

I feel depressed just reading it, but in a good way if that makes any sense at all. Anyway it was deep. WOW

[x N E R D - E E x]

awesome poem ^.^ its very sorrowful.. but it good 5/5 ^.^

[wolf_321]

You may not get this but I'll say it anyway just cause that's what I do. I get it. Good poem. 5/5!