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I walk this burning wasteland.
The ungodly stench fills the air.
Smoke plumes rise from burning carcases.
The gray snow covers the ground.
The sun has disappeared behind the clouds.
I walk this apocolypitc wasteland.
No life.
No breath.
None but my own.
I am lost.
I am alone.
I can't turn back.
I can't reverse what I've already done.
I let the world like to me.
Let me think that life could carry on so perfectly.
But I made a mistake.
I believed the lie.
And I have been broken.
My visions....My hopes....My dreams....
My heart.
And I cannot make it end.
I must continue to walk through this wasteland.
And I cannot turn back.
How much farther do I have to go,
Until my final step is taken?
- by Devilish Reminder |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/21/2008 |
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- Title: Broken and Lied To
- Artist: Devilish Reminder
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- Date: 12/21/2008
- Tags: broken lied
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Luna Deslumbrado - 12/23/2008
- i dont really like it either BUT i think you tried and i guess its good to other peoples views. 4/5
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- hott_emokid - 12/22/2008
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1/5 i thinked it sucked
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- KITTYKAT100394 - 12/21/2008
- 5/5 it was good i can relate
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- Devilish Reminder - 12/21/2008
- Oh...Dear....Mastema....(private joke...well not really...youd get it if you read anne rice) Okay in line 14, I said 'I let the world like to me.' WTF?! It should be 'I let the world lie to me.'
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- Devilish Reminder - 12/21/2008
- Oh hehe thanks. I love you guys!
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- Siir Snuggles - 12/21/2008
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That got me really me got me thinking. biggrin 5/5
AWSOMENESS, also not just saying that.
I know how it feels..
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- gooycheese - 12/21/2008
- Another 5/5 DR good job smile
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