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The latent essence of a soul new and untouched
is as formable as clay
my soul burdened with secrets
cries of pain buried beneath it
is bruised and shattered into a million tiny pieces
that I am willing to share with you
only you can augment my life
and pierce my soul
in a way foriegn to mankind
tame this beautiful,tenacious sprit of mine
keeping me sane and subtle
in this wonderful ebullient love we share
only you care
to touch me in all the right places,
hold me and never let go
you hold the key to my heart
lovely,bruneous guardian of
my tainted,sometimes raffish
soul....
- by trix_intrepid |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/29/2008 |
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- Title: First Time...
- Artist: trix_intrepid
- Description: It's a love poem...but it's not all mushy and hallmarkish. I hope you like it.It's raw and it came from someplace deep inside me so please give me your honest opinon i appreciate it...this is my first love poem I've shared!
- Date: 12/29/2008
- Tags: first time love beauty pain
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Comments (1 Comments)
- Amarante7 - 12/29/2008
- This is so awesome. It's really beautiful. I understood what you were trying to get across. I found it beautiful and sad.
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