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You say you're worthless
because he let you go.
I'd say he's senseless
but I'll never let you know.
You disbelieve in you
because he threw you off.
This is one of the few
times I say your wrong.
You say no one likes you.
I say you're wrong.
When you ask who?
The silence seems so strong...
I'm afraid.
Our friendship one
I'd rather not trade.
In the chance I find it gone...
I hear you say he left you.
A shoulder I give to support
In my heart my feelings true.
I never want you hurt.
But I cant help to feel a little bit happy...
because now...
now there's a chance for "us"
- by Raven Whisperwind |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/30/2008 |
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- Title: Love Unrequited
- Artist: Raven Whisperwind
- Description: Another poem I wrote one night while lovesick and feeling the world was so unfair...heh
- Date: 12/30/2008
- Tags: love poem
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Kuro Fukai - 01/18/2009
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hmmm... interesting....
I spotted one little grammatical error, but, it's good.
The ending really kinda clicked it for me.
good job :]
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- Chibi Flux Capacitor - 12/30/2008
- I like the ending =3
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