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Crying.
Doubt surpassing all restrained emotions in a shambled afternoon, The trickle of sadness begins to overpower.
Deep in thought of what is lost and what is not, brings forth an almost unbearable force.
Holding back the urge to release the anguish is impossible as the streams of regret fill the chalice of the soul.
Forever striving for a matter of infinite happiness, to only be confronted by our own miasma.
- by Cottoncandyocbra3 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/01/2009 |
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- Title: Crying.
- Artist: Cottoncandyocbra3
- Description: Something sad.
- Date: 01/01/2009
- Tags: crying
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Cottoncandyocbra3 - 03/13/2009
- Another one of my very weak, very early poems.
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- Mud99 - 03/13/2009
- Khristalia, you sound like a moron. Good poem though.
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- x__C r e a m - C h i - 02/07/2009
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T^T
ish make me sad D= - Report As Spam
- Dark_Gale017 - 01/27/2009
- Something sad is right, I'm not big into depressing poems because after a while they all sound the same. However, this is not not true with this poem. 5/5
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- iiReina - 01/26/2009
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it's....shorter, but just as depressing as most of your other poems. xD
i like it though mad - Report As Spam
- Bleuraven123 - 01/01/2009
- Again, wow. And i love the words you are using... It's just...so sad!
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- whitejade13 - 01/01/2009
- Oh wow. Just...... wow. Really. Nice. 5/5
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