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Si j’étais victime du destin,
Rien de mes pensées appartiendraient à moi.
Mes rêves seraient nuls ;
Son contrôle serait cruel.
Je serais une marionette comme toi.
Si j’étais victime du destin,
Rien de nos vies seraient significatives.
Nous serions une partie d’un histoire
Qui ne peut pas se concevoir.
Je serais une personnage insignificative,
Mais si j’étais victime de mon volonté,
Toutes de mes pensées appartiendraient a moi.
Je ferais mes erreurs ;
J’apprendrais des horreurs.
J’aurais la maïtrise comme toi.
Si j’étais victime de mon volonte,
Toutes de nos vies seraient significatives.
Nos sentiments seraient vrais ;
Nos raisons d’être ne s’éffaceraient jamais.
Je vivrais dans une realité vive.
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If I fell victim to destiny,
None of my thoughts would belong to me.
My dreams would be null.
Its control would be cruel.
I would be a puppet like you.
If I fell victim to destiny,
None of our lives would be significant.
We would be part of a history
That cannot conceive itself.
I would be an insignificant character.
But if I fell victim to my will,
All my thoughts would belong to me.
I would make my errors ;
I would learn from the horrors;
I would have control like you.
If I fell victim to my will,
All of our lives would be significant.
Our feelings would be true ;
Our reasons of being would never be erased.
I would live in a vivid reality.
- Title: Destin: Souverain Des Esprits
- Artist: Manther
- Description: I wrote this poem in my French IV class. We were working on "si" clauses. It reflects my beliefs on destiny and will. Sorry if my French has flaws in it. The translation is underneath the French version.
- Date: 01/24/2009
- Tags: destiny will french
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Comments (4 Comments)
- JodieUpton2009 - 06/01/2009
- wow! 5/5 i liked it in a kinda wierd and wonderful way
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- Dragonangyle - 01/25/2009
- tres bien!!!
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- fireshadowkatdemon - 01/25/2009
- 5/5. Absolutely wonderful. Good job.
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- Xx_Disturbed_Cupcake_xX - 01/24/2009
- I really like it it inspires in a weird way 5/5
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