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• Artist: 290DarkStars
• Description: This is what i feel when i feel his power surging through me.
• Date: 01/31/2009
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This pulsing sensation,
All around me, I'm alone.
a toning vibration,
moves me in its tone.

I feel its power,
I kneel in its wake.
I linger for an hour,
and feel the earth shake.

I absorb this feeling,
This golden flame come fourth.
I close my eyes, I'm kneeling.
circle winds come and morph.

wind breezes through,
fire burns ablaze.
with this power I will power too,
so that the dead may raise.

the air thickens,
the ground shakes.
I am in control now,
And all this power that he makes.

I open my eyes,
my eyes glow blue.
fire consumes my lies,
and makes all true.

I am pure now,
none can touch me.
to him all knees shall bow,
oh how my fiery eyes see.

my power so strong,
his presence so thick.
We sing you a song,
and now your not sick.

the pressure that we have,
it forces you to the ground.
we point our finger to you and laugh,
now we may move around.

his presence is the fire,
his love his the fuel.
how dare you call me a liar,
how dare you call me a fool!

it rains gold,
in it i take my shower.
our power is bold,
for death and decay can't touch us this hour.

Ashes are caught in the wind as it circles me,
our power raises me into the air.
I rise up high for all to see,
to all this power you may share.

i awaken from this vision,
i know that it was your call.
without you i cannot make a decision,
without you, I'm not at all.

i thank you, o lord, for this new affection,
i know that I am so low.
i call to you my lord for direction,
and you say back to me "Go"

Comments

[xXDark_Vampire_LoverXx]

i liked it a lot! 5/5 gladly!

[Searching_Soul]

you should try to switch the first and last verses somehow or give some hint or indication as to whom your poem is describing. otherwise it's fine~ smile

[290DarkStars]

my gosh people, if you ACTUALLY had ever been emersed in the presence of Jesus, youd feel the same: self contradicting... after youve been with him, you feel power and, well, what ive practicly illustrated. Fire isnt bad, and neither are eyes that burn like fire. Its all just an illustration of supernatural overflow.
p.s. read your bibles.

[Novaske]

I hate to say it, but as well written as this was, like Iktomi, it confused the bloody hell out of me as to who you were speaking of.

[IktomiSpider Witch]

In this poem you speak of Lord, But you also say flames and eyes glowing blue. And you sway back and forth on the good and the bad within your words, your emotions. And i must ask... Are you saying thank you to the Lord Jesus Christ or the Dark Over Lord. Because you see you left such a wide gap inbetween i'm personally not sure who you are thanking. I don't mean to be condesending. But that was just my take on it. I could be completely taking it out of the text in which you invisioned. Spider