The Wretched Soul

• Artist: 290DarkStars
• Description: I wrote this saying how i feel emo sometimes, and that was two years ago. But still the pain latches on to me like scars. so i wrote tis poem about that.
  
  by the way... im NOT an emo.
  
• Date: 02/05/2009
• Tags: wretched soul

I lay there in pain,
dying on the floor.
I can't feel anything,
but pain to my core.

I have had many idols,
to God I'm a whore.
I can only express my guilt,
through spilling my own gore.

With the slice of a bloody knife,
I let out a painful roar.
I'm confused, my life before me,
I don't know what side I'm for.

My heart is broken,
on paper, my emotions I pour.
I search for life, but the truth is,
I am alive no more.

I wonder through life,
it's now a bore.
I have no reason to live,
there is no one I adore.

I keep it a secret,
behind a closed door.
There is a secret fight,
a secret war.

With scars on my wrists,
I stand so sore.
I fall to my knees and cry,
"Abba! Make me clean once more!"

Comments

[Daddy Got This Account]

mm. deep, dark, emotional.... me love it. ^^ you know just how i like my poems dark. ^^

[290DarkStars]

ummm . I dont cut, just saying that i do for artistic depth doesnt mean that I do. but constantly hateing myself, i think, is cutting yourself emotinaly.

[-x- Fridge -x-]

Hm, you claim you're "not" an emo, yet your poem adversely talks about cutting yourself and you say you "feel" emo. I'm thinking that constitutes as emo. Not a bad poem though.

[290DarkStars]

im NOT jewish... anyone can cry "Abba". Its just one of his many names... it means Father, so I hope all of you can call me a Christian instead of Jewish.

[MUNKI3_GIRL]

I SORTA LIKE YOR POEM!ITS WEIRD.BUT GOOD

[MUNKI3_GIRL]

YOUR JEWISH!!

[xXDark_Vampire_LoverXx]

I like it very much. Shalom, my friend.