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You say you love me
But you love her too
You deny this
But everyone says it’s true
She loves you as well
This I am sure
For straight out and forward,
She told me herself
You say you love me
But is this lasting?
You embrace me
And say you truly do
But I’m not sure what I should believe
I just can’t tell
What is real
And what is just a game
This blissful dream,
This beautiful illusion,
That I wish would always last,
Can come crashing down
But do you say what you believe?
Is it honest and genuine?
Or is this “love” merely fickle infatuation,
A game, a toy; nothing special or unique?
Am I to trust your word?
Am I to believe that I am your world?
Should I risk being broken?
Should I chance being hurt?
I have no answers,
But I shall take that jump
I will trust you
For love is not knowing
That pain shall not come,
But having faith
That your heart will not allow it
So I shall take your every word
As the only truth
And I will believe
- by emeraldpuppy9 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 02/12/2009 |
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- Title: Just Can't Tell
- Artist: emeraldpuppy9
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idk, this just came to me XP
read/comment/rate =]
if u have any objections/suggestions plz tell me, dont just give me a low rating and dont tell me y, then it'll never improve XP
ty, for every1 who takes time to give me honest feedback =]
*authors note: ty, zhongwen... i fixed it XD typo XP - Date: 02/12/2009
- Tags: love real lies trust believe
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Comments (7 Comments)
- shadow_of_the_heart19 - 05/05/2009
- great job
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- ParadoX_Revolution_XlV - 05/04/2009
- good poem! :3
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- tehrandumhobo - 05/04/2009
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omfg.
does this relate to rl?
if it does, then i think you should trust him. - Report As Spam
- shadow_of_the_heart19 - 03/12/2009
- Awesome job. All your poems are really good smile
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- Phinagin2000 - 03/05/2009
- it's good but i've noticed so far that none of ur poems have spacing :O! please space them, and then i'll love u razz but u still get a 5/5 for being amazingly good
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- RebelSteeler - 02/12/2009
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Ouch... and right around Valentine's day. So, what did you do in the end? Please tell me you didn't get your heart broken! LOVE the poem...
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- zhongwen_shitsumeishi - 02/12/2009
- oh yeah first comment! xD but wow this is an awesomee poem....i'm speechless....you're so talented at writing poems =D, but this poem just has one grammatical error ("Am I to believe that I am YOUR world" wink But nevertheless, I love it.....it would take me forever to try to compose such a meaningful poem in such a short time ;]
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