My Sister Drags Me

• Artist: Nex Remeo
• Description: My sister close to my age would pull and push me around. She would also beat me up if I did not agree with her [that's where the head thing came in]. Little-Miss-I-Wished-I-Could-Rule-The-House. Eh but that has been years back and she has gotten better. Comments welcomed.
• Date: 02/19/2009
• Tags: sister drag

My sister is waring me thin
She's dragging me
Now my head hurts
And she wont let go
Now my head is bleeding
She keeps on pulling
I'm out cold now
I fell no pain
But my sister still drags me
She still thinks I'm here
But she in for a surprise
When my eyes close
My mouth shuts
My body goes cold
And my skins turn pail
Then shes going to cry
Because she can't drag me
Can't control me any more

Comments

[thrivingtoexist]

Yes, I love how your poem describes how it was
Way to go 10/10 and 5 stars to boot