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Right now, I am out of your league
I got every camera and light flashing at me
I got the whole world staring under my feet
Too much food on my plate, man I can't eat
The paparazzi flashing bad, waiting to hear a story good
Taking pictures of celebrities as they should
It's there job, the more pictures of money they take
The more slices of their favorite birthday cake
They missed me, by a couple seconds mate
I wasn't prepared for this, so I showed up late
Ten minutes up, I ain't even shown up, Wait!
Here comes the man, fresher than the entire state
Great, so I walked in, put my pen inside my pocket
Checking out the profits, waiting for the lock in
I stopped and, an interviewer came by
Looking for the right guy, to put inside his mag, why?
I came up, I was the worm in the ground
Practice makes perfect, mane look at me now
So astound, past tense astounded
I'm so, oh so new, look at what I did
It wasn't easy though, haters try to stop my go
But I was speeding the whole time, crazy but still with some flow
Now I'm furious, can you try to stop me, no
Grew up so nice, I could become your big bro
You could probably sell the lyrics for a good price
Claiming that your swag is so nice
But you could never sell the kiD Ness
I'm so wonderful, man I'm priceless
(Vocals)
"So if you ever wonder
Why kiD Ness is still up under
Don't be fooled by what you hear
It'll only disappear
Can't stop trying, I must rehearse
Stick a knife and fork inside of this verse
They say kiD Ness will come to an end.."
(Voice) I must have been daydreaming again...
Comments (3 Comments)
- Cottoncandyocbra3 - 05/20/2009
- Wretchedly bland and boring. You use the weakest of rhyming and rhyme techniques, you use the most abhorring speech, and the entire poem drips of a sound lack of practice. The lyrics are banal, and the entire piece is amateur work.
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- lilandrez - 05/18/2009
- I don't mind constructive criticism at all ( wish I had more). I wasn't trying to do revisions on these. I was just testing my self to see how good I'm able to get ideas and rhymes out. That's why there's no revision.
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- yaiya - 05/18/2009
- its a good pice of writing though i dont believe it have reached its full potental it always helps me when i go back over and revise...im not trying to be mean just constructive feed back.. if u want we can song swap some time..
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