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you told me you loved me but you lied to me
i still feel the pain that you left behind
you make me do things to myself that i shouldnt
do.you said you would catch me when i fall
but all you did was let me hit the cold,hard ground
now i feel like your apart of my past but i still care
you were my everything then,but i have nothing now
all beacuse of you
- by cookiesand anime |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 06/18/2009 |
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- Title: love you left behind
- Artist: cookiesand anime
- Description: this is something i just came up with so i hope u can feel the same way enjoy!
- Date: 06/18/2009
- Tags: love left behind
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Comments (5 Comments)
- xXninjabatXx - 07/29/2009
- I can relate completely. Good job!
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- His_Crazy_Angel_1 - 07/07/2009
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... wonderful...
I can feel the hurt that is there to feel with in the poem
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- Usaga - 06/28/2009
- The feeling is definitely there. However, by adding a period to the first sentence, you make the second one seem like one really long run-on sentence. Keep at it! I find poetry removes the ill dust from the soul :3
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- InsomniacNightlight - 06/25/2009
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wow very touching and you made it rhyme..
look im really sorry liz... im sure you'll find the right person in your life. you rock just like your poetry! - Report As Spam
- OmecronGambit - 06/21/2009
- Pretty Good
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