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Softly glowing
Sunlight shimmering
Tears brewing
Can't start crying
Soft heat touches my fingers
Fluffiness comforts me
My friend starts screaming
But I can't move
Soft heat
Now ice cold
Frozen in my spot
In my side something hits
On the ground I lay
On this polar opposite day
Soft heat comes back to me
Starting in my toes
Starting to burn
My body catches fire
People come running
I start screaming
A loud bang
No one moves
The cold came back
And got them to
- by RosesFallingLikeRain |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 06/19/2009 |
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- Title: Soft Heat. Hard Cold.
- Artist: RosesFallingLikeRain
- Description: I came up with this a while ago. The idea is that the person is struck by a car and they feel the coolness of death sweeping in until the car that has run them over catches fire. Their life started to end the minute they saw the car. It's depressing, but the people are all killed while trying to help, because the engine explodes.
- Date: 06/19/2009
- Tags: soft heat hard cold
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- WorIds - 06/19/2009
- it's pretty good but if you added a bit more description without making overbareingly long it'd be better i think...4/5
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