Pain keeps me going

• Artist: Rogelio-CP_64
• Description: I wrote this kinda on the spot but I'm putting out here to see what u guys think. Plz don't be so cruel cuz it's not one of my best but try to be honest and plz comment and rate!
  
  Ps: check out some of my other poems cuz I think they r better
• Date: 08/02/2009
• Tags: pain keeps going forget past

This world of mine has changed
And there's nothing I can do
At best I feel miserable
This much I know is true

This is no longer about love
And no longer about lies
This is all tearing me apart
As my heart softly cries

But I have to be strong
And I got to move on
This is no longer time for dwealing
But my soul feels as if gone

Nevertheless,
I cannot give in
I have to keep moving
And give life a new spin

Comments

[Rogelio-CP_64]

yeah exactly! lol

[Serafiella]

It may not be your best, but i get the meaning of it all the same. You've just got to keep moving on, keep breathing, keep living life.