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it came in rapid heart beats
it came with frightened screams
it blinded me with shadows
and all these awefull beings
it wrapped itself around me
and said such awefull things
it was then that i embrased it
for everyone to see
i found love in the end
for love was the end of me
- Title: death of a vampire
- Artist: mj1ninja
- Description: sad
- Date: 09/14/2009
- Tags: death vampire
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Comments (3 Comments)
- seven_Sin_incarnate - 02/19/2010
- people tend to forget about poetic liscense. it makes writing so much easier. everyone has at least one vampire poem i'm sorry to say. lol. not bing mean just stating a fact. (even i have a few.)
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- UC Poika - 09/22/2009
- I didn't really think it that great. It is to be frank kind of trite to be trite.
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- x0StrawberryLemonade0x - 09/19/2009
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The poem itself is very nice. Short, but that's the way I like 'em. The only thing I can say about it is, is use proper grammar.. which means try to use proper capitalization an punctuation, please, it really makes reading it easier and more enjoyable.
Vote for me in the poetry and lyrics arena! biggrin - Report As Spam
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