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My heart stops when she pass
My mind wonders off in the middle of class
Her long locks whip across my face as she walk
When she is close I can't seem to talk
The smell of her perfume sweeps me away
I cant concentrate on nothing today
How could one ever be so nice
To talk to her; impossible; my feet are ice
The bell rings and she walks right pass
Thats why I hate the end of class
Its okay; no worries; I'll she her another day
And then; I promise you; she won't get way
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- Artist: Kaleb28
- Description: In English class we have to write two poems and say them to the class. I made this one and I kind of like it. I had my friends read it and they agreed that it was good. Now i want to know the opinions from the people on my favorite website.
- Date: 11/18/2009
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- doomsjay - 09/02/2011
- Brilliant. Nothing I haven't seen before, but it's amazing. Well done.
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- mnmcc - 11/18/2009
- That is aesome it is sooooooo romantic and pretty!! Two thumbs up!!!!!
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