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you won't promise me forever
so i've got one foot out the door
but it's getting cold out, baby,
and next to you it's warm
i'm don't know if i want forever
but won't you just hold the door
i like it with you, baby,
won't you try to be warm?
i won't tell you never
i'll just keep looking at the floor
but have you ever though that maybe
we could weather out this storm?
i see now that you'll never
lift my heart off of the floor
and it occurs to me that, maybe,
you have always been the storm.
- Title: redemption and recovery
- Artist: susanner
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Description:
"so you sit in a chair, brush the snow from your hair and drink the cold away. and you're not really sure what you're doing it for, but you need something to fill up the days." -- bright eyes
just playing with rhyme schemes.
originally posted on my deviantART account under fragilemacabre (my usual screenname, but i started this gaia account years ago) - Date: 12/20/2009
- Tags: redemption recovery love angst
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Comments (2 Comments)
- HTOB - 12/29/2009
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thats good
its different and i like it but it could b better
vocabulary was ok - Report As Spam
- BatzLove - 12/20/2009
- thats really nice. 5/5
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