Something More

• Artist: macybabiBEAST
• Description: A girl who aches for more from her distant boyfriend.
• Date: 02/28/2010
• Tags: something more

I want more
Not just a simple hug, or kiss on the cheek,
I want more
Talk to me all the time, not once a week,
I want more
I don't wanna see you with her anymore,
I want more
I want you to love me like I love you smile

Comments

[Ajani Kai]

It holds a beat, as poetry often does, but it lacks structure. It does tell a small story, but where is the true feeling of it? I know you can do much better.