You stole my heart

• Artist: sheleena_marie_moto
• Description:
• Date: 04/24/2010
• Tags: stole heart

heart
a kiss bliss
heart skips a beat
held close
held tightly but gently
loving every moment
i want this to never end
i kiss u back
and theres a laugh and a blush
as something sort of makes itself present
more bliss
dont want to get caught
it feels so good to be entranced by you
it feels so nice to of have met you
i wish i could see you now
your smiling face
your soft lips
being held in your soft embrace
lost in your arms
you stole my heart

Comments

[sheleena_marie_moto]

its supposed to be sort of corny and funny and wow i never realized i made that mispell

[Saxy Sullivan]

the feel of the words don't match the feel of the meaning. Softer and more flowing consonants would work better like in your line "and there's a laugh and a blush." Also... "embrace" there's no I.