Just want this to end

• Artist: xXScarlet ShadowXx
• Description: this is actually part of a song i wrote. its my first post, so i would really appreciate some feedback (:
• Date: 07/28/2010
• Tags: heartache love

i turn and see your smile,
and i forget my troubles for a while.
but the burn you left on my heart,
keeps asking me if you're worth while.

and then im about to break down
i cant hold on 'till the end
then, i am breaking down
i just want all this to end

cant you see the damage you do to me?
but i still love you so,
and so i stop and let you be.

and i just want this to end
(are you worth while)
and i just want this to end
(but oh your smile)

Comments

[Ahseyo]

Nice, nice, nice!!! It feels like it could be a minor note in this, but I sense a upbeat kind of feeling. Comment back and rate please?

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