Never Understood

• Artist: Emo Girl Preep18
• Description: This is just something i just came up with. It just says that my life isn't that great and that im "Never Understood" fully.
• Date: 12/19/2010
• Tags: never understood

At home with pain in my chest,
up late with no rest.
Everything goes wrong,
I never belong.
Always getting yelled at,
sometimes i just want a bat.
I want to scream at the top of my lungs,
never giving a f***.
Wanting to die,
to end my pain.
Trying to survive,
but always ends bad.
A crazy mess,
Never understood.

Comments

[Emo Girl Preep18]

I fixxed it Thnks for pointing it out XD

[Kimiko Owl-Rider]

It's good but the poem is in the wrong place.
You put the description where the poem should be.
I am not going to rate you because of that, however, there were some grammatical errors such as; "I crazy mess" I mean come on, that doesn't even make sense! and "but it always end bad" instead of bad, you should use *badly* it's just proper grammar.
But because it wasn't entirely badly written, I give you this;
3/5