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He yelled at me today,
For the very first time.
I didnt get the dishes done before he got home from work.
He told me I was useless and lazy.
I tried to walk away,
But he appologized and I took him back.
He hit me today,
For the very first time.
I talked back to him for the first time
And he slapped me across the face.
I tried to walk away,
But he appologized, and I took him back.
He choked me today,
For the very first time.
I tried to stick up for my self,
And he wrapped his hands around my throat and squeezed.
He didnt let go until I was unconcious.
I tried to walk away,
But he appologized, and I took him back.
He stabbed me today,
For the very first time.
He saw me looking at anothe man today.
He said that if he couldn't hav me than no one could.
And he stabbed me seven times.
He appologized, but I was dead, and i could not take him back. emo
- Title: I took him back
- Artist: Bug Katie
- Description: This poem is about abusive relationships.
- Date: 04/21/2011
- Tags: itookhimback
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Bug Katie - 06/06/2011
- thanks. i am actually more of a novel writer though. lol. but this is something that i had to write for english but i kind of liked it. and i have never seen the movie chicago before so im sure that line wasnt from there. lol
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- Beautiful x Mayhem - 06/06/2011
- I love it <3 you've got a really amazing talent
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- Little Milkflower - 06/03/2011
- This is freaking amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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- Dat Tanuki - 05/01/2011
- Something about the way it was written isn't jiving with me, but I'm not quite sure what it is. It might be how he "stabbed me seven times" reminds me of a line from the movie "Chicago."
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- Bug Katie - 04/22/2011
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was it good? or was it terrible? lol. im not sure i wow is a good thing or a bad thing. lol
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- xXHazmattazXx - 04/21/2011
- wow......O_o
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