you are

• Artist: Bluma124
• Description: my first poem for my girl friend. plz comment
• Date: 05/25/2011
• Tags: love fire poem first

you are the light in the dark
you can be bright and strong
or dim and weak
with the more hate and ridicule you get
you will grow stronger, brighter, and more vibrant
you can destroy all of those people with the strength they gave you
you will send them to where they belong
they will never understand who you are
but i have always understood who you are
and that is why i love you.

Comments

[WhiteMageBef]

Eh, it works for a little 'gothika love' kinda deal buut personal-level with me. Fairly dry, the same old story about every other love poem.

[Luckyeight888]

i love u really doesn't work in this situation.
THERE IS NOTHING,
that can describe how i'm feeling right now ;w ;