Valentines Day

• Artist: Jadis the Immortal
• Description: i poem i made when i was sad and alone, i was writing it in class and had to read it out loud then after class the teacher said sorry and said it was so sweet... well what about u?
• Date: 11/07/2011
• Tags: valentines

She sat there, Alone.
The cold rain too much to bare.
It beat her neck and back.
Down her cheek, the tears leave a track.

He sees her sitting there.
His love for her too much to bare.
He wanted her to love him back.
He watched her as he ran around the track.

Without a word, he wrapped his arms around her.
She wanted him to linger longer.
He whispered in her, "It's okay, You'll be fine."
Looking into her eyes he whispered, "Will you be my Valentine?"

Comments

[Jadis the Immortal]

Thanks

[User_10273415]

I really like it ^-^

[Jadis the Immortal]

Sorry... the last line of the second stanza its a typo... i meant to put:
He watched her, as he ran around the track
x] gotta love typos right? they make us all human