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	~B.O.W.B.S. Official Manga!~ Brought to you by Bent on Wonton Bubble Shading - Art Shop!

	"Ch. 4 - The Rival Shop" - Pg. 69
	"Ch. 4 - The Rival Shop" - Pg. 69


You are on page 69. If you've missed pages just go back to Ch.1, Ch.2, Ch.3 or the beginning of Ch.4. Belladona Nightshade · Sun Oct 07, 2007 @ 05:51pm · 27 Comments


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	Announcement! Well... to be honest, I was a bit dissapointed by the lack of comments last week. I really worked hard to make my fight scene a good one... and I figured people would help me out by commenting more... So, as a mini revenge (and cause I did need a transition page) I have put this page up. This is young Alba remembering his younger days... he should be about 9 or 10 in this picture. Obviously it was not a complicated page and I have the REAL one I'm working on still getting touch ups. Still.. he is pretty cute. biggrin But yeah... transition page. Now, the time that it takes for the next page to come out is up to you. Once I get 20 comments from 20 different people, the next page will come up! So remember gang, tell your friends! (And if you want to bring my comment count up in the previous page, I'd appreciate it.) Next Page: When I get 20 comments from 20 different people To All readers! Please try to get your friends to read this! I want to cause enough of a stir to get my journal put in the Featured Journal section on Gaia. So the more peeps that know and comment on my manga the more attention I will get. So tell everyone, that if they like this they should comment! I've met people who say they read but have never posted a comment. So maybe this will encourage them to! Also, to get my journal in the feature jounral section PLEASE select the recommend button under "Gaia Journal" up top of your journal options. If anyone is interested in TONING! If you are and want to help me make this manga even BETTER then please PM me with samples and how you would tone one of my pages. I now have no gold to offer for this help. It would would be completely voluntary. Thank you for your interest. *~Bella~* The BOWBS guild is probably going to shut down soon due to the lack of activity. But I will still make a BOWBS thread else where. Check here for the link next page. BOWBS GUILD *~Bella~* Offline Belladona Nightshade · Community Member · Sun Oct 07, 2007 @ 05:52pm


	Aw. its a mini-alba. looks good Bella Offline Hex Kor · Community Member · Sun Oct 07, 2007 @ 06:47pm


	Wonderful job! I've been keeping up with it for about a month or two now and I can't stop rereading it. :3 Offline velcro etoile · Community Member · Sun Oct 07, 2007 @ 08:13pm


	I love reading this manga heart can't wait til next upload 4laugh Offline Elyphelet · Community Member · Sun Oct 07, 2007 @ 09:20pm


	Hi, I've actually been keeping up with your manga for quite a while now, but I've never actually found the energy to comment XDD; And, I guess, it's time I should XDD; So here we go. I LOVE your manga. You draw so well!! And I always look forward to the next page update! ^^ Ah, p.s. chibi Alba is SOOO cuuute!! <333 Offline LoveAngel Samurai · Community Member · Sun Oct 07, 2007 @ 09:39pm


	hmm... makes me wonder what happened to set them on different paths... but that's another page, right? umm... shouldn't the "then" be "than" in the last dialog box thingy? Offline The Kovie · Community Member · Sun Oct 07, 2007 @ 09:50pm


	Awwww! Alba's so cute! crying Offline Shinja_Mizuno · Community Member · Sun Oct 07, 2007 @ 09:57pm


	Ooh! You're right! surprised I spotted another typo too! Well, it's not so bad, I used the wrong font in my rush anyways, so I can fix that! And I also added more to the last paragraph. ^^ Not adding make it mysterious, but I don't think there's really any need for mystery in this scenario. Thanks Kovie! I can always count on you to be my spell checker! lol *~Bella~* People that commented: 6! Offline Belladona Nightshade · Community Member · Sun Oct 07, 2007 @ 10:18pm


	Younger Alba looks..WOW! o.o A blink and I'm all grown up....scary... xp May stay active on Gaia again after being away for so long. 11.28.11 Offline XvXYuNiEXvX · Community Member · Sun Oct 07, 2007 @ 11:06pm


	Keep up the killer work Bella. <3 Offline totally_out_of_it · Community Member · Mon Oct 08, 2007 @ 02:43am


	Omg! Alba is so cute! I want to kidnap him and make him mine xp Offline BlackFireAngel26 · Community Member · Mon Oct 08, 2007 @ 03:26am


	i love your art style and the story line. little Alba`s so cute ^ ^ 4laugh Offline Tnseukkoi · Community Member · Mon Oct 08, 2007 @ 03:29am


	awww little Alba isn't he cute! ^^ Offline Akuma_ Higurashi · Community Member · Mon Oct 08, 2007 @ 05:56am


	very very nice.. haha the way you have his pants, without the line, makes him look like a little ghost.. hee hee. anyway, very loverly.. sorry you didn't get alot of comments last time. i helped best i could. ^_^ well adios! till next time! Offline MrNailVT · Community Member · Mon Oct 08, 2007 @ 12:21pm


	Eeek!! Little Alba!! OMG he's so cute!!! Offline Midnitergrl · Community Member · Mon Oct 08, 2007 @ 10:22pm


	I order one cute and cuddly Alba plushie, please! No, seriously... I see he didn't have a scar that young. How'd he get it? This page is heart-wrenching... ;-; Also: I just now read the Trinia Magic Capital preview you had on your mule. It sounds great! Are you going to continue? Offline shiyonin · Community Member · Mon Oct 08, 2007 @ 11:50pm


	o: Well then... I can't think of much to say. Some first comment this is! I've been reading your journal manga for at least a year now... At least... Maybe almost around two? I don't keep track of this stuff. xD;; I got hooked on it since I used to be a lurker of the Line Art Jam. <.< >.> Anyway... beautiful work, as always. I love your style. <3 I'll try to comment more regularly. <.< >.> I just never find the time to. >< Offline sdrawkcab · Community Member · Tue Oct 09, 2007 @ 01:22am


	Comment count = 15! 5 more guys! *~Bella~* Offline Belladona Nightshade · Community Member · Tue Oct 09, 2007 @ 01:37am


	Hey Bell-Bell. Revenge huh? Well, now that things seem to be going better at home.. and in my love life even though there's really nothing left of my love life... scratch that, i have no love life... but im getting over it. Like the page though. He's so cute. I'm # 16! 4 more! Offline KarabeanSweet · Community Member · Tue Oct 09, 2007 @ 01:41am


	suspense eek xd Still love your manga biggrin Offline Princess_Mononoke13 · Community Member · Tue Oct 09, 2007 @ 03:15am


	I know I know.. my comment is late. It's not my fault! I was out of town for Thanksgiving! Alba totally looks devilish in this panel. There is nothing innocent about him he looks like a whiney little brother. But then again I did work with children for quite a while, lol. Though I definitely agree with BonClay on this one "Come on Alba! You can do better than that!" Kick your brothers A Offline Korda** · Community Member · Tue Oct 09, 2007 @ 05:49am


	Ok Girl your my BF, I love BOWS and I just CAN'T WAIT TILL YOU GET 20 POST Offline Alicia Lestrange · Community Member · Tue Oct 09, 2007 @ 05:52pm


	Gah! you're work is so brilliant (read all 69 pages in one sitting) I'm not only posting because I want you to post another page... but to let you know that you have one more crazy fan boy! Offline Othello Farrel · Community Member · Wed Oct 10, 2007 @ 01:51pm


	That's 20! Offline KarabeanSweet · Community Member · Wed Oct 10, 2007 @ 07:41pm


	YAY 20! -=chants=- We want the Page! We want the Page! -=/chant=- Offline Korda · Community Member · Wed Oct 10, 2007 @ 08:18pm


	omg so cute... great job on this page =] Offline Tohsaka-san · Community Member · Mon Oct 15, 2007 @ 10:12pm


	Just found the manga and I can't stop reading it! Alba looks so cute when he was younger!! Offline YuKiKo92 · Community Member · Tue Apr 21, 2009 @ 07:05pm

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