mrgreen hee hee how cute! keep it up Belladona *thumbs up* idea
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Akuma_ Higurashi · Community Member · Tue Feb 07, 2006 @ 05:14am
Holy CRAP Akuma! You're fast!! You posted 1 minute after I put up the page!! eek You've got some sort of secret powers I'm not aware of??? ninja
ANNOUNCMENT
Anyways, this is page 10! Yay! My manga has finally made it into the double digits and I don't plan on stopping! biggrin We're being introduced to Alba finally and for all those that wish there was a touch of romance in this... well... who knows! heart? I am a girl after all. lol
The next page will be up on the 21st of Feb!
Yeah, we're back to the old 2 week thing, but this was a special occasion cause I actually had page 10 ready ahead of time! lol Anyways, thanks for the comments!! heart
Homigosh, I want an Alba!!! -squeal!- He's so cute~! 4laugh And he's blushing!! Gah~! heart Cute installment. whee Josh shouldn't pick on poor Alba! He's loved too. D:!! Bella's adorable.wheeheart
I love the quality of the work. My only complaint would be that you can't really tell where in the room people are anymore, but then, background tends to clutter panels when there's only one character at a time. I love the dejection by the plant, though.xd
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Sagando Mirasta · Community Member · Wed Feb 08, 2006 @ 04:36pm
Cute! 4laugh Am I still chasing after the clowns? twisted lol...oooh.. I wonder what's brewing with Alba?? ninja
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Josh_JB_Benton · Community Member · Wed Feb 08, 2006 @ 10:51pm
I know a little bit of what might happen...>.> ninjaheart
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Alba Soiree · Community Member · Thu Feb 09, 2006 @ 05:59am
i just read your manga. that is so cute. i love it.
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oopsidied · Community Member · Fri Feb 10, 2006 @ 03:35am
I'm slightly lost but I know on the next page I'll figure it out. The line-art for this page doesn't feel as crisp or with much detail as the pages before. Feels like when there is more dialogue, your art is cut down by it. But I like it. The relationships are already unfolding before the viewer. I heart foreshadowing.
Awww! It's actually oneof my favorites Piress. >_< lol. I'm just happy I was finally able to fit a little more information into the page.. though I guess the drawings are rather simplistic... but well, this picture was drawn before lots of new pages posted preivous to it.. hopefully, the next one, you'll approve of! *Runs off with determination*
Don't take it wrong. I approve of this page but not as much as the previous pages, Bella. Your style and skill leaves me wanting to see more. Your art makes me want to turn the page. 3nodding So, yes, run with determination to do more! Cuz I can't wait to see what's next. domokun4laugh
Whee. Josh is sooo kyoot! Yesh, dats right. Keel those clowns. Keel them dead.
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Hana Maehata · Community Member · Sat Feb 18, 2006 @ 06:20am
i never thought i could fall in love with an anime character *sigh* mrgreen it was awesome! i cant wait for the next!!
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BabyTinky · Community Member · Sat Feb 18, 2006 @ 07:08am
Lovely.. ahh your a guy now XD
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Librra · Community Member · Tue Feb 21, 2006 @ 02:55pm
awwwwwww someone's got a crush *sounds like a kindergardener* xp so cute, I love that little guy who was hiding in the corner...though JB amuses me to no end wheeidea
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lilyoftheflames · Community Member · Wed May 03, 2006 @ 08:25pm
More emotive text biggrin I really like that. Adds a nice touch to the characters relationships. Plus you have a flare for bringing out distinct emotions in the character's expressions too, so combined it makes for an exellent feel to the entire manga smileidea
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RecklessImagine · Community Member · Wed May 03, 2006 @ 09:49pm
heart awww!!! heart that's sooooo cuuuuttteee!!!! ^__^ hahahha!!! I'm not very good at drawing scars... i give you props for that... idea
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MrNailVT · Community Member · Thu May 04, 2006 @ 11:35pm
The fourth pannel is my favorite, it reminds me of myself when I'm trying to cover up the fact I was afraid of something. idea
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snowtiger6776 · Community Member · Sat May 06, 2006 @ 02:17pm
I see some crushing going on 4laugh awww. so sweet!idea
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Yuna de la lune · Community Member · Sat May 06, 2006 @ 07:17pm