Alright! I finished it! True that I still didn't make the deadline but at least it's done! biggrin
I really like how Bella looks on the second pannel and how Alba came out in his little feature picture. He looks pretty hot actually... ninjaredface And although I wanted an extra pannel to appear in this one, I'll have to find an imaginative way to put it in the next page. lol. Before I knew it, I had inked the layout lines already when I thought of the missing pannel. >_<
Anyways, I hope you guys liked this page! I draw all day to get it done! xd EDIT: NEXT PAGE: April 4th
As it turns out, I never needed to MAKE a portfolio! crying So I finished the page early. It will be coming up on the 4th instead of the 10th! Yay! Now, everyone waiting will have to wait less and for all the people just tuning in, well, you're lucky now aren't you? lol. See y'all on the 4th.
alba is soo cute i love the way you did the eyes so pretty, and once again YOUR ART ROCKS lol
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Angel Fox Gurl · Community Member · Wed Mar 22, 2006 @ 04:49pm
O.o Damn, I look hot xd I love the way it looks Bella. And the advertising, well, it's not TOO hard a job... ninja *misses headband* crying
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Alba Soiree · Community Member · Wed Mar 22, 2006 @ 07:04pm
Hey, now this looks great! The qulity is going up Bella, I can tell! I actually really enjoy Bubbleh's facial expression on the third panel, she looks cute. Alba DOES look like a hunk in the second to last and I like Bella natural pose in the.. 1,2.3.4th pannel. I dunno, it looks like she's in the middle of moving. Oh by the way.... am I ever coming back?? gonk
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Josh_JB_Benton · Community Member · Wed Mar 22, 2006 @ 08:34pm
nice work on the whole thing overall! I really enjoyed reading it so far ^_^
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kina-chan · Community Member · Thu Mar 23, 2006 @ 02:02am
I'd have to agree, Alba does look hot in this page. Great page also, the art is amazing like always. I don't mind the wait it will be an early Birthday present for me then (on the 13th). idea
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Julina Lynch · Community Member · Thu Mar 23, 2006 @ 04:04am
sooo pretty <3
looks very good =] and Alba look very hawt <3~
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Kiorio · Community Member · Thu Mar 23, 2006 @ 04:48am
I love it. You do well with those unusual perspectives such as back-views. heart
Akuma_ Higurashi · Community Member · Thu Mar 23, 2006 @ 05:22am
cant wait till april the 10th now!!
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Spindle shank · Community Member · Fri Mar 24, 2006 @ 05:10pm
Good luck on finishing your portfolio! I know how tedious it can be to get all that work done.
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yukidream13 · Community Member · Mon Mar 27, 2006 @ 07:55am
-waves hands frantically in the air-
CAN I HAVE ALBA PLEASE?! CANICANICANI?!
-SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEE~!-
He's so cute! 4laugh The hair and eye deails on the close-ups always absolutely amaze me. *_* I love it.
I also like how close the whole group seems. But I'm starting to miss JB.xd
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Sagando Mirasta · Community Member · Thu Mar 30, 2006 @ 04:09pm
woah 0.o And you're saying my manga looks professional? yours is totally awesome biggrin
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Plushi-kun · Community Member · Thu Mar 30, 2006 @ 06:30pm
=O,O= The shading is amazing!!! I love this comic, it makes me wanna read more 3noddingheartwheeidea
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lilyoftheflames · Community Member · Wed May 03, 2006 @ 08:33pm
That style of main chat bubble dialogue and side text really works well here. Not only are you capturing the main conversations, but also the sort've..passive reactions and banter that would go along with it in a real life situation like that. Hard to do but you pulled it off nicely smileidea
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RecklessImagine · Community Member · Wed May 03, 2006 @ 09:57pm
i love the definite proportions and differences in height! And in that one panel with the hakai look-alike i adore the detail in his eye!! idea
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MrNailVT · Community Member · Thu May 04, 2006 @ 11:40pm
Ooo, I like Alba, he's so innocent looking. And he likes Bella so much, it clearly shows. idea
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snowtiger6776 · Community Member · Sat May 06, 2006 @ 02:13pm
sweatdrop I love sweat drops! I love the layout too. I can never do it idea
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Yuna de la lune · Community Member · Sat May 06, 2006 @ 07:22pm