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EXT. HOUSE-NIGHT
Two intruders break into a house; the crash of the glass breaking wakes up everyone. The owners of the house wake up and go downstairs to investigate. Screams come from the downstairs, which wakes the the sleeping child upstairs. The child comes to the bedroom door and hears another scream. The child runs to the parents room to inform them of what she heard.
CHILD
(running in and out of rooms upstairs)
Mom!! Dad!! Where are you!!
Another scream comes, but this time it's louder. The child runs down the stairs and into the livingroom. To her surprise, she finds her parents there; they were lying on the ground motionless and soaked in blood.
CHILD
(child replies back in a shocked scream)
Mom!! Dad!!
EXT. CASTLE-NIGHT
A man is dashin to the top of the castle. As he reaches the top, he leaps into the air. Guards pour in on the balcony and begin to shoot arrows at the man. The man is suddenly hit with one of the arrows in the stomach.
MYSTERIOUS MAN
(looks at wound and then at the crystal container)
If i cannot have this, no one will! CAST AWAY!!
EXT. HOUSE-NIGHT
The little girl is crying; two shadows toddle up behind the child. The child notices the shadows behind her and turns around to observe that they are two intruders. She gets up and runs to the kitchen, pulls a knife out of the cabinet and heads back to confront them.
CHILD
(looks at the intruders still crying;
frighten, she holds the knife up at them)
Leave...please.
The two intruders look at each other and then back at the child. They both start to pace towards the little girl with their arms open out to her. The child stands there and closes her eyes as the two intruders draw nearer.
CHILD
(warns them again with a shout)
STAY BACK!!!
As one of the intruders puts their hand on her shoulder, the child pulls away, but then stretches out her hands and forces the weapon into the intruder's body. The child slowly pulls the knife out of the imposter's body; the other trespasser kneels to observe the wound. He glared up at the child and bagan to dash towards her.
CHILD
(scared, the child started backig up)
Stay...away.
The man came closer and closer to the child. Finally the last intruder fell to the floor covered in blood. The child let the knife drop to the floor, next she went to unmask the trespassers. As she bent down to take their mask off, their faces became more of a shock to her.
EXT. CASTLE-NIGHT
The crystal box begins to disappear from the man's hands. Everyone starts to scramble to find the box, but the box is nowhere to be seen.The mysterious man begins to shrivel up and burst into dust.
GUARD
(looks at the man vanishing, then turns
towards his men)
Men, get down to the bottom of this castle and
find that box!!
EXT. HOUSE-NIGHT
The child is still sitting there trying to find all the possible answers of why these two people look exactly like her parents.
CHILD
(looking at her parent's body)
What. How? But...my parents are over there.
The child turns to clarify her words, but when she looked, there was nobody over there.
CHILD
(turns back to her parents and starts crying)
Mother!! Father!!
The little girl begins to cry louder and lays down in her parent's unresponsive arms.
EXT. CASTLE-NIGHT
The guards were still searching for the lost crystal box, but the box was nowhere to be found. The leader of the search team strolled into the castle and into a large room. On the other side of the room sat an old man faced towards a window.
GUARD
(bowing)
Lord K, the container was not retrieved.
LORD K
(glaring out the window)
This is bad. If that container ends up in the
wrong hand, i fear what is to happen.
TO BE CONTINUED........
This is the end of the preview. Please comment me if you liked it or have some suggestions about it. This was a preview of episode 1 of 15, but this was only part of 1 not all. I wrote this in script form because i hope that this will be a show in the future. I will be putting more previews up....maybe the rest of episode 1. SO I HOPE YOU ENJOYED IT...THANX FOR READING! smile ^_^ smile
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- | Submitted on 10/16/2008 |
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- Title: MOON MIRAGE 1 (part 1)
- Artist: xX Paranoid Agent Xx
- Description: This is my own story of a anime work that i am still in the process of working on...i wrote it in script form to let you know...so enjoy and comment back on here or my profile...peace!!
- Date: 10/16/2008
- Tags: moon mirage
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Comments (7 Comments)
- xX Paranoid Agent Xx - 10/18/2008
- thanx for the suggestion, but i wrote in like this because it's actually a comic and i just needed dialogue and a description on the action that happening...so i didn't write it with all the detail...like what a flower freakin smells like....^_^ peace....lol....
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- W00tification - 10/18/2008
- For true script format it has to be centerspaced. Also I wouldnt use all script format in this whole idea. Because it doesnt leave very much to go on as far as material. I suggest though do a written story out and get your thoughts in order and go from there because script format is very limiting on creation and imagination.
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- xX Paranoid Agent Xx - 10/18/2008
- Check out the rest of adventure one that i'll be posting up in a few. The title will be MOON MIRAGE 1 (part 2). So yea...go check it out ^_^ enjoy. adventure two will be fun and i'll try to post it sometime today. ^_^ peace!!
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- Aisia_Lovely - 10/18/2008
- I enjoyed it. I'm anxious to know what happens.
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- xX Paranoid Agent Xx - 10/17/2008
- to make this clear to some people, there are two stories going on at the same time because they become really important later on in the story....be patient....i'll put the rest of episode one soon....you'll see....plz just wait, but i do like that some of u are confused..lets me know that u are thinkin bout the story...^_^
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- shadow_tail_Kiba - 10/17/2008
- i like it tho for some reason the one with the kid reminded me of the movie ' hide and seek'
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- Crying Angel 264 - 10/17/2008
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hmm...
very well done, but...
have you written the ending?
also, why are there two separate stories just mushed together to make one?
i'm with Leonardo Gibralter III.
edit this and act it out.
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